Editland

After a few days fighting a cold, I'm back in editland. I've gotten some very helpful comments from family and internet friends... don't getting bogged down in descriptions, don't be cliche, show don't tell, add more inner dialogue from the heroine. All good stuff. I've revamped the prologue and made it flow much better, and now I'm working on cleaning up the first few chapters so I can submit to more agents. I'm getting anxious to put myself out there again - fighting the impulse to submit before I've polished it up some more, but not wanting to over edit, and get caught in a cycle of never being satisfied... fun times!